замечательно. жаль, места сверху не хватило.

интересно композиционно.. )

Композиция очень усиливает ощущения!
Волшебно!

Late, by myself,
in the boat of myself,
no light and no land anywhere,
cloudcover thick.

I try to stay just
above the surface,

yet I'm already under
and living with the ocean

~Rumi

The Artist, Ariel, and Caliban at Sea

"And two by two, like cat and mouse
The homeless played at keeping house"

W.H. Auden